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#735679 - 08/02/08 04:46 AM Collab XIX; starting!
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Hey lady conductor, if you got the time
Will you punch my ticket here, punch my big 10-ride?
I ain' lookin' to go no where, I just wanna get away,
I ain' lookin' to ride for free, you know I'm willin' to pay
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#735797 - 08/02/08 03:52 PM Re: Collab XIX; starting! [Re: vvvm]
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chorus?

I really don't mind paying to ride
Better than being left outside
Left outside soaking up the rain
Let me get on board your fast moving train
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#735807 - 08/02/08 04:03 PM Re: Collab XIX; starting! [Re: WRC,Jr.]
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...on track to Lake Nowhere.
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#735847 - 08/02/08 05:22 PM Re: Collab XIX; starting! [Re: LisaG]
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Nice, WRC,Jr.

LisaG, can you give us a little more?

Like a verse.

Or a, eh, couplet?
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#735963 - 08/02/08 08:54 PM Re: Collab XIX; starting! [Re: vvvm]
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Well, I am not a lyrics writer, but I'll give it a shot.

Watch this space, lemme light a spliff for good inspiration and I'll be back...
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dipped in deadly poison and is thrown from not more
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#735965 - 08/02/08 08:56 PM Re: Collab XIX; starting! [Re: LisaG]
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May I recommend, ...


... two spliffs, ...


... for extra-inspiro!


This is a Los Collaberos choon.
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#735967 - 08/02/08 08:57 PM Re: Collab XIX; starting! [Re: vvvm]
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Now you're talking !

pfffffffffffffft.... hmmmmmmm good
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#736128 - 08/03/08 04:19 AM Re: Collab XIX; starting! [Re: LisaG]
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I'll listen to the track clacking
Watch the clouds float bye
I'll doze off and dream of Jenny
Her skin the co,or of a penny \:D
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#736138 - 08/03/08 04:44 AM Re: Collab XIX; starting! [Re: Timster]
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Hey lady conductor, if you got the time
Will you punch my ticket here, punch my big 10-ride?
I ain' lookin' to go no where, I just wanna get away,
I ain' lookin' to ride for free, you know I'm willin' to pay.

Watch the clouds float by, I'll doze off and dream of Jenny
I'll listen to the tracks a-clacking, See her skin the color of a penny,
Hey lady conductor, if you got the time,
Will you punch my ticket here, punch my big 10-ride?

CH:
I really don't mind paying to ride,
Better than being left outside,
Left outside soaking up the rain,
Won'cha let me get on board your fast moving train.

No, I ain' lookin' to go no where, I just gotta get away,
I ain' lookin' to ride for free, you know I'm always willin' to pay,
I'll just listen to the tracks a-clacking, Dream of her skin the color of a penny,
As the miles go flying by, I'll doze off and dream of Jenny.

CH:
I really don't mind paying to ride,
Better than being left outside,
Left outside soaking up the rain,
Won'cha let me get on board your fast moving train.

CH:
I really don't mind paying to ride,
Better than being left behind,
Left behind in the pourin' rain,
Won'cha let me get on your fast moving train.
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#736139 - 08/03/08 04:45 AM Re: Collab XIX; starting! [Re: vvvm]
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cool, because I am tired.
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#736409 - 08/03/08 09:26 PM Re: Collab XIX; starting! [Re: Timster]
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Excellent! Do you have any chord progressions in mind?

I wrote this down on a piece of paper sometime ago:

Dm Bb x4
Gm C x4

I have no idea if this sounds good or not. Maybe you can use this as a start.
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#736560 - 08/04/08 02:44 AM Re: Collab XIX; starting! [Re: WRC,Jr.]
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I think it should be done ala' 60's era Kinks.
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#736665 - 08/04/08 12:03 PM Re: Collab XIX; starting! [Re: Timster]
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I may get to this today ...
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#736692 - 08/04/08 01:40 PM Re: Collab XIX; starting! [Re: vvvm]
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Coool. I need something to work on. I figure one collab per week?
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#736717 - 08/04/08 02:51 PM Re: Collab XIX; starting! [Re: Timster]
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I want in...
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#736796 - 08/04/08 05:07 PM Re: Collab XIX; starting! [Re: RecreationalThinker]
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Cool.

I'll start with a basic drum, voc and rhythm guitar today.

Stay toont.
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#736894 - 08/04/08 08:35 PM Re: Collab XIX; "TheBig10Ride" v.1 [Re: vvvm]
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Aiight, BPM should be about 150.

Here's the derrangement, with drums, ruff guitar and with and without ruff voc.:
TheBig10Ride.

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#737123 - 08/05/08 04:31 AM Re: Collab XIX; "TheBig10Ride" v.1 [Re: vvvm]
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And (he) pleas, feel free to do the voc!
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#737306 - 08/05/08 05:27 PM Re: Collab XIX; "TheBig10Ride" v.1 [Re: vvvm]
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CH: is it really A7-Dm...or actually A7 - D ???
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#737338 - 08/05/08 06:43 PM Re: Collab XIX; "TheBig10Ride" v.1 [Re: Timster]
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Dm.

The A7 is kind of like an A5 add 7.
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#737365 - 08/05/08 08:04 PM Re: Collab XIX; "TheBig10Ride" v.1 [Re: vvvm]
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thanks.
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#737424 - 08/05/08 11:14 PM Re: Collab XIX; "TheBig10Ride" v.1 [Re: Timster]
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Bass track? (not the fish, the instrument). Wow, that would be cool, a bass (fish) playing the bass (instrument). Maybe we could write a song about it? OK, I'm just killing time until my file uploads. And it's done.

https://www.yousendit.com/download/Q01GSXQ5bTgxUUN4dnc9PQ

By the way, This song so far has the feel of a Led Zep song, Achillies Last Stand. Which it cool as hell.
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#737545 - 08/06/08 04:48 AM Re: Collab XIX; "TheBig10Ride" v.1 [Re: WRC,Jr.]
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I should have waited until Bill added some tracks, but here is a rather weird avante Guard lead guitar.


Timster Lead Guitar

If it is garbage let me know.
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#737592 - 08/06/08 06:59 AM Re: Collab XIX; "TheBig10Ride" v.1 [Re: Timster]
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Made a rough mix, and I think it is coming along really cool. I think my lead actually fits \:D
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#737609 - 08/06/08 11:35 AM Re: Collab XIX; "TheBig10Ride" v.1 [Re: Timster]
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Downloadin' ...
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#737841 - 08/06/08 10:05 PM Re: Collab XIX; 8-6-08 v.2 [Re: vvvm]
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#737846 - 08/06/08 10:29 PM Re: Collab XIX; 8-6-08 v.2 [Re: vvvm]
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Sounds good so far. Your vocals sound great. Did you redo them? What else do you think we need to add?
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#737894 - 08/07/08 01:33 AM Re: Collab XIX; 8-6-08 v.2 [Re: WRC,Jr.]
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Same voc, just cleanin' up the mix ...

Mo' geetars?

Where's RecreationalThinker?
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#737918 - 08/07/08 02:12 AM Re: Collab XIX; 8-6-08 v.2 [Re: vvvm]
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some keys

cut and paiste at will
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#737924 - 08/07/08 02:16 AM Re: Collab XIX; 8-6-08 v.2 [Re: Timster]
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Downloadin' ...
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#738201 - 08/07/08 09:05 PM Re: Collab XIX; 8-7-08 v.3 [Re: vvvm]
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#738249 - 08/07/08 11:26 PM Re: Collab XIX; 8-7-08 v.3 [Re: vvvm]
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I think this is my first attempt at lead guitar. Feel free to edit as you see fit:

https://www.yousendit.com/download/Q01FT2pPcTJYSHhjR0E9PQ
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#738253 - 08/07/08 11:49 PM Re: Collab XIX; 8-7-08 v.3 [Re: WRC,Jr.]
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#738259 - 08/08/08 12:04 AM Collab19; 8-7-08B v.4 [Re: vvvm]
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#738370 - 08/08/08 04:26 AM Re: Collab19; 8-7-08B v.4 [Re: vvvm]
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Nice cut and paiste job \:D Pretty cool tune so far.
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