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#1920173 - 08/06/24 12:49 AM new song collaboration
Jonathan Paul Offline
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I had written this song maybe 25 years or more ago. Finally
did something with it but needed a sax part for the intro and chorus instrumental. I had Marty listen to it and he came up with this fabulous horn arrangement and sax work. Take a listen, thanks.

https://soundcloud.com/user-963471762/gotta-let-her-know2

JP

PS It's just the first mix but wanted some feedback.

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#1920231 - 08/06/24 11:20 AM Re: new song collaboration [Re: Jonathan Paul]
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This is a very good tune. I really enjoyed working on it.

-m
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#1920292 - 08/06/24 03:39 PM Re: new song collaboration [Re: Marty Gilman]
Jonathan Paul Offline
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Thanks for all your work on the song.

JP

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#1920313 - 08/06/24 05:04 PM Re: new song collaboration [Re: Jonathan Paul]
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Cool song. Cool mix. One of the best I've heard in these parts.
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#1920317 - 08/06/24 05:22 PM Re: new song collaboration [Re: TAPKAE]
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I liked it very Much! Thanks for posting! Well done chaps!
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#1920320 - 08/06/24 06:48 PM Re: new song collaboration [Re: Alan]
Andy McClelland Offline
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Yeah!!!
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#1920326 - 08/06/24 07:08 PM Re: new song collaboration [Re: Andy McClelland]
Jonathan Paul Offline
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Thanks guys much appreciated. It wouldn't sound the way it does
without Marty's help.

JP

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#1920429 - 08/07/24 04:12 PM Re: new song collaboration [Re: Jonathan Paul]
motown59 Offline
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This has an epic quality to it with the grandeur of that intro dropping into the groove.

Yes, nice saxophone’ing!

I gotta listen in my studio. The bass on my headphones seems wacky at around :40 something after the descending F, Em(guessing)

Good tuneage !
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#1920448 - 08/07/24 04:56 PM Re: new song collaboration [Re: motown59]
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Sounds like a classic. Kind of literally...old Chicago, maybe? Not the horns--without a trombone, that aspect ain't going to sound like Chicago...more the verse composition/groove.

Anyway--that's not a dig--I think it's great to write something that sounds like it's always been here, so to speak.

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#1920549 - 08/07/24 10:15 PM Re: new song collaboration [Re: Popmann]
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On a multiple re-listen I have to say that the High Hat part kinds of annoys me. I had to say it!

I feel it's too loud and a bit drifting/distracting!
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#1920565 - 08/08/24 12:09 AM Re: new song collaboration [Re: Alan]
Jonathan Paul Offline
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Thanks for the feedback.

Kel The Descending F chord to E bass inverted C chord with an E bass (piano) Guitar C chord

Alan Yea it bothered me too but I wasn't knitpicky enough.
Understand the the cymbals and toms were done free hand on keyboard
triggered samples. I've come to embrace little things not perfect.

Jamie thanks for the kind words.

This was recorded on a VS-1680 and mixed down to computer.

Thanks everyone for listening I appreciate it. And again Marty
did a great job!

JP


Edited by Jonathan Paul (08/08/24 12:10 AM)

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#1920569 - 08/08/24 12:49 AM Re: new song collaboration [Re: Jonathan Paul]
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that was fun, good tune great singing, sax guy can play \:\)
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