Not at all.
The lyrics sure work and suit the instrumentation, groove and melodic stuff going on behind the voice.
And when the time comes, only you won't know you've gone
Great line!!
I'm working on one about the passage of time at the moment. I'm not sure if it's done yet.
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Horn player tuning: Give me Bb.
Never mind, Just give me a B and I'll flatten it myself.
Andy on SoundCloud